Rune Factory 4 Art: Much Needed Comfort

Now for some context of this image for those of you who never played this game, and most likely won't fully understand. In Rune Factory, your character is able to marry another resident in the town you live in, but before you can do that, you have to ask her/him out on a date. You do that by gaining enough relationship points with a certain character, then confessing your love to her/him. However, even if their relationship points with you are high, the chances of them actually accepting your love request is random. So for a while, I had my character confess his love to the girl who's relationship points were highest with my character, that girl being a Chinese klutz named Xiao Pai. And over, and over, and over again, every time I had my character confess his love for her, she would just laugh at him thinking that he was joking with her. After this happened a couple dozen times, I started to imagine how I would actually react if I were desperate enough to do that, and got laughed at every time. 

Enter the butler Volkanon, literally the biggest manly man and the largest sweetheart that you will ever meet at the same time, I love him, he's just so awesome. I imagined just what you see in this picture, Volkanon comforting my character with a big manly hug as my character wallows in his rejected self pity.

And there you go, a rather lengthy piece of context for those of you who never played Rune Factory 4. Hopefully those of you who have played it will understand a little better.

That all being said, what do you think of the image itself? Is there anything I can improve on? I'd love to hear any feed back that you can give.

Lest and Volkanon belong to Marvelous AQL and Neverland Co.